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Re: Falling in Love with Parades, Military Marches and the girl
The poem is really good, really well coordinated, and I like the natural rhythm of it - the part of the cigarettes makes it seem realistic and yet doesn't take ...
Nov 19, 2006 -
Re: Untitled. Needs title
Great poem! This is the best part. "Achshav, ani yodea lama ha achi shelcha matai" Now, I know why your brother died Surprising ending but really a great twist.
Nov 19, 2006